All Comments on 'The Blood Slave Ch. 01'

good , but it needs to flow better

It's a good story and I really like it, but maybe you could redo it and slow down and go through the thoughts and feelings not to mention actions penny and Draco are going through

Thanks for all the glorious feedback, and the high ratings. Very nice.

Interesting premise. Nice to see some 'not so nice' vampires for a change. I hope you continue to explore the bdsm elements. Looking forward to the next installement.

I need more! I'll be checking for updates