All Comments on 'The Blue Necklace Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great work, more please.

Love love loved it! It's progressing quite nicely and andy is adorable!

Fixitman8267Fixitman8267over 1 year ago

This chapter was better written with minimal slang. However, When the subject of a sentence is plural the verb must be plural, as well.

"Dream on, sunshine because dreams is all that will ever be. Now, get out of my kitchen."

"dreams is" should be "dreams are" I see that a lot by British mature authors.

I like the story. I'm just having trouble stumbling over the poor grammar.

Hillbilly55Hillbilly55over 1 year ago

I’m enjoying this so very much.

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