All Comments on 'The Boathouse'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
thinking

somehow i have read this story before somewhere

Joyce19063Joyce19063over 16 years ago
I stopped reading at the 9 inch mark

wish you guys would grow up

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nicely written

The writing is good, and although the subject may be a bit "old hat", the story is a quite pleasant read. My one complaint would be that it ends abruptly, but the story as presented is probably not enough to warrant a sequel. Keep writing!

-- KK in Texas

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 16 years ago
same old same old

I had - unrealistic - hopes for this story but when the author

said

"While I am generally very proud of my nine inches of thick, throbbing manhood in intimate moments"

I knew that all the cliches up to that point were going to be repeated, over and over again -

and in this I was not disappointed.

What do we have? A guy who thinks with his cock - pretty usual.

A woman who thinks not at all - unusual except in stroke stories.

Athletic sex - usual, and not at all hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good start where's the rest

very good story so far,,, where's the rest.....

ProfWriterProfWriterover 16 years ago
How thick was it??

Good story but why the need to mensurate? If it's thick and long enough to make her happy I don't need to know the details!

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