by barry_nine
The writing is good, and although the subject may be a bit "old hat", the story is a quite pleasant read. My one complaint would be that it ends abruptly, but the story as presented is probably not enough to warrant a sequel. Keep writing!
-- KK in Texas
I had - unrealistic - hopes for this story but when the author
said
"While I am generally very proud of my nine inches of thick, throbbing manhood in intimate moments"
I knew that all the cliches up to that point were going to be repeated, over and over again -
and in this I was not disappointed.
What do we have? A guy who thinks with his cock - pretty usual.
A woman who thinks not at all - unusual except in stroke stories.
Athletic sex - usual, and not at all hot
very good story so far,,, where's the rest.....
Good story but why the need to mensurate? If it's thick and long enough to make her happy I don't need to know the details!