by randemwriter
I love this story. I truly hope that this wasn't the end, and that you'll write more for it. I can hardly wait to know what will happen to Anya.
I really liked this one, and I liked how she broke free at the end, but how she was still not completely free. I would have loved to see her discover her new life as a free woman.
leaves the reader almost as lost and confused as Anya in regards to what the future may hold for her.
xxxhugsxxx.
Really liked the story (not that big a fan of all the sharing, but the rest was awesome), would love a continuation.
I wanted to caress her face, touch her body, slowly make love to her while reminding her of all the naughty and painful things that had been done to her that evening.
nothing could be more cruel than this making her love only to remind her of her gangbang and degradation from previous evening tgw whole farce lovemaking to mock and humiliate her further
hated the ending would have been better if she had turned into a dominatrix and turned him into a sissy
he didnt changed in 230 years he still wants to give her pain and humiliation and orgasm denial only even after the bond broke
but he has changed her 180 degrees from innocent virgin naive girl to a pain and humiliation seeking person she will still give him pleasure despite he deny her everytime with pain and further degradation
she still doesnt wanna run or hurt him she hurted the man who freed her but not the man who made her life a living hell each day for 230 years renewing her body to start her neverending suffering again
she is like a dream come true to sadist ,abusive,psycho ,cruel,shameless,irredemable wifebeaters
he would even love to kill her if her pain will dying arouse him
well i read all your works eveyone featuring a super delicate shy unwilling woman forced into being a pain and humiliation slut by an pure abusive sadist who do the cruelest things to her and never lets her have pleasure
all the stories containing sadist are super selfish egomaniacs inhumane psychos who are have zero empathy for her as if she is his worst enemy all while claiming that she is the most beautiful girl he has ever fallen for
and all the female characters taking all the pain reluctantly begging for more which seems impossible for any 5 ft super thin and delicate girls you claim them to be
now your profile says you are a female so you might be just like these super petite girl with a pain and humiliation by some older man you have crush on .it seems you had experience some sexual assaault during your childhood by some good looking mature pedo sadist if you really are a woman
but if you are lying through your profile and you happen to be a man i can guarrantee you that you are a sadist pedo or you like to groom preteen and teenage girls through pain and humiliation instead of sex
hope you dont delete my comment
although i still like how low your imagination can go how much pain you want to give to these girls
keep writing but please offer some backbone to your female characters as for male characters they are fantastic just the way they are