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by CLARK_HANSON

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Robert_NotRobert_Notalmost 15 years ago
A Really Good Start

Particularly liked your stiff (sorry!) dialog - fitted the characters well - and I loved the puns! - but I found her dirty talk at the end a bit too radical a change character.

Overall a really good start to a series. Can't imagine why no-one has seen fit to comment on this story up to now.

R

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
very nice

Thanks. Well-written and hot but not so hot it's sheer fantasy.

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Retired engineer who has enjoyed reading good erotica for over 30 years. Who remebers Midwood and Dominoe Books? I have endeavoured to write in the style of authors that over the years have done it for me.

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