All Comments on 'The Booth in the Back'

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srshystersrshysterover 13 years ago
AWESOME!

It started off very slowly. At first, I thought this was another loser. But then it kept building and building and....what a climax...can't wait till Tuesday!!!

krafttykrafttyover 12 years ago
love the story!!

where did you go nothing new in 2 years!! i hope you are still writing and posting somewhere. any thanks for the story and i wish thee were more!! waht happen the following Tuesday?? thanks again Paull

StaceytvStaceytvover 9 years ago
More please

As crude as the story is, what a turn on, please write the next chapter..........

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 6 years ago
good story

This is a good story but it's missing the cocksucking. Licking cum is great (I love doing it myself) but you needed to have some cocksucking in this story. Or - if you do another chapter then put it in chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good first start

Started off ok, but then picked up, and has good potential for a follow up!

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