by mona215
It started off very slowly. At first, I thought this was another loser. But then it kept building and building and....what a climax...can't wait till Tuesday!!!
where did you go nothing new in 2 years!! i hope you are still writing and posting somewhere. any thanks for the story and i wish thee were more!! waht happen the following Tuesday?? thanks again Paull
As crude as the story is, what a turn on, please write the next chapter..........
This is a good story but it's missing the cocksucking. Licking cum is great (I love doing it myself) but you needed to have some cocksucking in this story. Or - if you do another chapter then put it in chapter 2.
Started off ok, but then picked up, and has good potential for a follow up!