All Comments on 'The Boss'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A bit of a tease

For a first effort, not bad. I was left with the feeling of wanting more, which is a good sign. On the down side, not enough to enter a rating. Will look for more...

Lking4u2Lking4u2almost 9 years ago
The Boss - part 2

A nice start to the story, what about the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th parts..............

EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago
Several years later 2

My comments about The Agency also apply to this story. What a great pity there was not a sequel. I felt cheated but have still given it a 5⭐️. Hopefully the writer will continue writing in the not too distant future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting premise.

But doesn't deliver.

After he wakes up from chloroform, there ought to have been some real teasing. Of his cock. Of his balls. Of his asshole. To tease him extensively to get him so hot that he'll want to be ass fucked.

Three stars.

OzeminotaurOzeminotaur23 days ago

Great story to bad the author never finished it as it showed great promise

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