All Comments on 'The Bottom Tier: Ari and Cato'

by Cruel2BKind

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EMArnoldEMArnoldover 12 years ago

So brilliant. A fitting end to the trilogy.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Damn!

I absolutely have no words; just struck dumb, Cruel. That was the perfect ending.

LoveBird1929LoveBird1929over 12 years ago

You do dark good. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Ending

However I wouldn't mind a later chapter to this particular story... Very good and well thought out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just amazing. Wonderful Read

Just amazing. I am telling my friends to read your writing.

canndcanndover 12 years ago

One of your best works if not the best. I hope you'll continue it one more time to let us see them get to that dream of living together. Great job!!

ChappieChappieover 12 years ago

Your stories about the Bottom Tier are some of my favorites. Thank you for adding another one to the mix!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Painful beginning but great read

You have the gift of making readers feel for your characters. Your bottom tier stories are some of my favorites. What a horrible world you've built, but there are pockets of love and hope in it. I'd love to see you develop an entire novel out of this where they eventually overthrow the govt (read The Preacher Man by Hammingbyrd7). Can't wait for more.

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08over 12 years ago
Excellent story

What a bleak world, but Cato and Ari found each other to help them through it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Jeez, lady

You've got me tearing up here. Love, hopes and dreams rising out of such a sad, terrible world.

I've recently discovered your writing, and it is top notch!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow...

I thought you were a guy from how dark you had gotten in Poor Simon, but I was so surprised when I looked at your beautiful pic! Your writing is fantastic, and I especially enjoy the dark parts! Thank you for sharing your stories with us :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Beautiful.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 11 years ago

I agree Beautiful... I hope there can be say a 10 year follow up to see if Cato and Ari managed to get there own place

blastwizardblastwizardabout 11 years ago
This feels so much like real life it is scary.

Your work is wonderful. It is sad, beautiful and hopeful. I am a romantic at heart in a desensitized world. The stories you write make a person think and truly makes one consider the life that they want. That is powerful. Please never stop writing, and I hope Ari, Cato and the others do find a way to make their lives the best it can be despite the world around them.

wingedchaoswingedchaosover 9 years ago

One of the best! Such tenderness and want - to love and be loved! Thank you!

ilovegibbsilovegibbsalmost 6 years ago
Awesome!!!!

I'm soooo hooked on your Bottom Tier characters! I want more! Lol. Seriously, is there any chance of continuing their story?? Its such a sweet and tender love story blooming in the midst of terror and pain. You've made me fall in love with your characters, they almost become part of my life. You're amazing. I would really love to see more chapters. Please????😊😊😊😊

CaramelunicornCaramelunicornover 1 year ago

I need an encore! A follow up with these precious men.

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