by Cruel2BKind
I absolutely have no words; just struck dumb, Cruel. That was the perfect ending.
However I wouldn't mind a later chapter to this particular story... Very good and well thought out!
Just amazing. I am telling my friends to read your writing.
One of your best works if not the best. I hope you'll continue it one more time to let us see them get to that dream of living together. Great job!!
Your stories about the Bottom Tier are some of my favorites. Thank you for adding another one to the mix!
You have the gift of making readers feel for your characters. Your bottom tier stories are some of my favorites. What a horrible world you've built, but there are pockets of love and hope in it. I'd love to see you develop an entire novel out of this where they eventually overthrow the govt (read The Preacher Man by Hammingbyrd7). Can't wait for more.
What a bleak world, but Cato and Ari found each other to help them through it.
You've got me tearing up here. Love, hopes and dreams rising out of such a sad, terrible world.
I've recently discovered your writing, and it is top notch!
I thought you were a guy from how dark you had gotten in Poor Simon, but I was so surprised when I looked at your beautiful pic! Your writing is fantastic, and I especially enjoy the dark parts! Thank you for sharing your stories with us :D
I agree Beautiful... I hope there can be say a 10 year follow up to see if Cato and Ari managed to get there own place
Your work is wonderful. It is sad, beautiful and hopeful. I am a romantic at heart in a desensitized world. The stories you write make a person think and truly makes one consider the life that they want. That is powerful. Please never stop writing, and I hope Ari, Cato and the others do find a way to make their lives the best it can be despite the world around them.
One of the best! Such tenderness and want - to love and be loved! Thank you!
I'm soooo hooked on your Bottom Tier characters! I want more! Lol. Seriously, is there any chance of continuing their story?? Its such a sweet and tender love story blooming in the midst of terror and pain. You've made me fall in love with your characters, they almost become part of my life. You're amazing. I would really love to see more chapters. Please????😊😊😊😊