All Comments on 'The Breeders Ch. 02'

It is a VERY different society and perhaps not one which appeals to every reader; but I will look forward to Chapter

Three as things are getting very HOT!

YES, MORE,MORE

i hope you continue this series.. i'd really like to see that one guy dealt with lol... thank you for a very good read

This is well written, but there should be some more participitation from the other passengers. Many more chapters are needed to move this society to greater toleration of the males within it. Please continue.

I agree with the others, this is really a good story. I love the sex but was hoping you would develop more with the relationship with the Contessa.

More chapters please.

Would like to see a chapter three. Does he stay on the island?

You need to continue the story. Contessa and Micah need to end up together forever!

It would be great if you picked this story up again. I believe you could make it most interesting.

Nice story when you wrote third part of that story .where Micah become the saviour of women tribe and become the legend

This was a good story up to this point: - "He saw that she had shorn her pubic thatch, and was amazed. (...) She had trimmed the hair in an undeniable effort to please him, and it did"

How old were you, when you wrote this story - you "shaved brain"?

And..

From where comes this sick obsession - that even on the island cut off from the world.. the woman is supposed to have a shaved.. a bald pussy?

- You have never seen, to the own eyes, a NORMAL.. hairy woman??

Besides.. WHEREWITH and HOW - she shaved her pussy to the bald.. on this island??

Island with child bearing age women. Ship captain washes ashore with passengers. Captain has 12" dick and so on. Are you the same person who wrote "Because I care"?? At least finish it with a flourish. You can do better.

I hope one day you'll add more to this story. It has been told rather well.

Interesting story, a fun read. Too bad it was never finished. Only four thumbs up because it was left hanging for so many years without being finished. I hope it was only because you got to busy doing something else and not because of some tragedy.

Very predictable

Well that was a waste of fucking time wasn’t it. Another great story unfinished why the fuck did you even start this story it just wasted your time in writing it and our time reading it.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ For inspiration to continue