All Comments on 'The Briefcase Ch. 05'

but only a very sick male

I wonder where we are going... Rape? I think that is harsh and uncalled for, the result of a non-understanding mind. And where would anyone get the idea you are a man? Such silliness.

At any rate, good stuff but I think we need to progress here. Either Jessica can figure out what to do about Eric or she can't. No complaints, just I am anxious to know... and you said there are 12 Chapters altogether. Now for Chapter 6! Thanks!

I do not think a paired (and in this story she is paired with anyone and everyone belonging to the club)voluntary Dom/Sub can have a rape scene. By working and taking monetary tips, she is a paid professional 'lady of the night', her agreement, that has no boundaries, gives her to any club member without restriction (except possibly death) so while she may not enjoy a person or type of sex, she has already agreed and it cannot be rape.

The previous comments about rape, leave the thoughts outside without actually reading your words. The rape is in reality the rape of her mind as she is slowly seduced by the need to submit to Eric. His taking her there without much force other than the hidden forces planted throughout the story which seems to be leading to her submissive state.His understanding of her body's reaction is the rape of her innocence and the delving into the darkness of orgasm on command. Brilliant use of suggestion and build up looking forward to the other chapters as they appear.

Mmmm very enticing and delicious piece...loved it!!