All Comments on 'The Burglar Ch. 02'

by CBTPete

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Clumsy,

You write with a great deal of choppiness. Your words do not flow smoothly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great story

Great story, keep the chapters coming.

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