All Comments on 'The Cabin'

Good story, but I think it would have been better if they hadn't been so expert in sex.

lOVED IT.

Now,mum and inlaws comeup for a visit and all have a wonderful time

It was a good start, but the conversations seemed like it didnt flow at all. The relationship was also very undeveloped and they went from not knowing each other to in love and married in just a few paragraphs. The sex scene was quite unrealistic too and so the reader isnt engaged in the story at all.

to the cabin was way too fast.