All Comments on 'The Calm Before The Storm'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
After the storm

She needs to get rid of this pyscho before she is dead.

rebeccaMHrebeccaMHover 19 years ago
Loved It !!!!!!

the best of this genre i have read it some time thank you very much for sharing this with us.

kind regards

rebecca

rebeccaMHrebeccaMHover 19 years ago
Loved It !!!!!!

the best of this genre i have read it some time thank you very much for sharing this with us.

kind regards

rebecca

PrimaryPrimaryover 19 years ago
Good story

well written,loved the knife play

PrimaryPrimaryover 19 years ago
Good story

well written,loved the knife play

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanover 19 years ago
Needs a bit of work but...

This shows promise and could indeed prove to be another writer born thanks to Lit.

SN

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
loved it

Loved it, the entire idea of security within the Master and also because he calls her Bella at the end like my Master does me.

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