All Comments on 'The Captives Ch. 02'

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scipioparkins almost 11 years ago

loving this very much

Nice style, well told, more please.

Evilpandaqueen almost 11 years ago

good story.

I'm enjoying the story so far...so is it possible that this man is her "dead" husband? No body recovered plus same nick name. I wonder how he feels about playing with his daughter in the last chapter? What a wickedly romantic twist . (If it's true). Please update soon!