by Miltone
oh man! really impressed with the plot. Thank you for the nice story
Write on!
Wow ! What a great story ! And full of good ideas !
Very romantic, extremely sensual and quite erotic.
You built up the tension and anticipation wonderfully and then released it in an overwhelming climax.
Well Done!
Nice to have you back. Your literate, perfect stories were missed.
That was so good. Thank you!
Smallest point - would a cellist have long nails?
Lukas
I got so wet and horny from reading this, that before I could leave this comment I had to go and mastubate.
You've been away for far too long, and been much missed.Keep writing. This one is up to your old standard.
i needed that, thank you so much... overwhelmingly intensely sensual story; Mmmmm.
You are by far one of the best erotic I have ever seen. Your stories never fail to deliver. Good story!
Another great love story from the author, this one has an unusual but very interesting background. The story has great possibilities for more chapters. As it is, brevity is its only real flaw. Five stars.