All Comments on 'The Change'

by JayValentine

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Trade In - Time!

Angel trades in her old lover Marcus for a new and improved model Mya. Ya gotta love a girl who knows what she wants - and goes after it. Good Read! Nice Write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You have the Power

You only need a finer brush stroke to be a very good erotic author. Don't paint the bad so black and good so very white while ignoring the implications of the overall acts. Look forward to hearing more from you.

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