All Comments on 'The Cheating Girlfriend'

1* garbage!

nuff said.

This is an ok effort, but it lacks an intrigue. It is more like details of a slut's weekend. What would have been hilarious is if Steve began to suspect something and took revenge on her by writing garbage in all her final papers, detailling to every professor what a slut she was and that if they wanted, they could blackmail her if she wanted to avoid the zero she deserved. Of course one professor would resist the slut and denounce her to the University's authority. In the end, her slutty ways get her kick out of school, with 0.0 GPA. Now she can have all the sex she wants as the new local whore.

That way you will not insult us with any more BS stories like this one.

Based upon the current storys' "outline", I had to rate this a one. If this is a multi part story, I suggest indicating continued at the end of the chapter, that may increase future chapters ratings.

The character names of FB #1-4 was a real killer for this story, character names are suggested.

Ignore the haters, they don't have anything better to do.

This was a simple read, perhaps a bit short and sweet, but it was fun and erotic. I personally enjoyed it quite a bit. Keep it up.

lfuck all the rest of the haters, cuz hating s what they do. i think this was a very nicely written story. keep it up