All Comments on 'The Cheerleader's Diary Ch. 02'

by Erlikkhan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
SO, SO HOT!

So fucking HOT! I especially loved the daddy and daughter scenes! Amazing! I wish I was Sarah!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
DAMN!

I don't know how you do it, but you rock, Erlikkhan! I think that you're the best author on Literotica. Kick-ass, yo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep your characters straight

Chapter 10, first paragraph, you wrote, "Sarah put it in her mouth and immediately knew it wasn't her pussy she was tasting." That should have been, "Gloria put it in her mouth and immediately knew it wasn't her pussy she was tasting."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Continue this!!!:O

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