All Comments on 'The Cheshire'

Please continue, I'm anxious to see where it goes.

very intriguing start and very well written. pls keep up the good work.

This felt a little rushed, but a good set up. Looking forward to seeing more.

you must keep going. This is very intriguing and i am really liking it. I wonder what makes Luke 'unique'. hmm..

I really liked what you've written so far. Only thing though is that you should consider having someone edit it for you due to spelling errors and punctuation/grammar.

community colleges do not have sororities; and i think the story could be edited a bit to flow better and not in chunks. Good idea in a way, but needs a bit more creativity.

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