All Comments on 'The Chinese Whip'

Excellent suspense so that the reader can actually picture the torment in the mother as she witnesses her daughter being violated and yet aroused. You create a very good tension and erotic heat especially in detailing the mother's oral servicing of her daughter

This lady can really write a suspensful NC story. I love her writing. Finally, a woman's perspective about rape. I love the mood she sets, the descriptions that only a woman can give. Keep it up...your writing makes me keep it up!

Trapper

Hi Traci !

Almost as good as "Vacation Photos" very Hot story .

The type I like .

Only way it could have been better is if it would have been in the first person.

Would have been a very hot Traci, Story.

Love

Sailor

this is the first story of yours I chose to read, Very nice. I look forward to reading them all. I alos, read your profile... I agree with your comment about Emma! Maybe we could do her together!

i love mother-daughter scenarios like this

Chinese is not a language, they speak Mandarin

Anyone would have reported it. That's what you do and that's what made this tale unbelievable.

I know in text the girls were on their email after a couple of minutes but.... does that mean the daughter was watching porn? Lol