All Comments on 'The Cigar Room'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Another work of art

"ToServeHim" certainly knows how to use the power of language to arouse erotic desires... and for this woman to intimately feel the throbbing delight of the story.

Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Close But No Cigar

Nice erotic fantasy but the believability of the setting weakened the effect. Where, oh where, were the owners or staff of the facility. This wasn't a private club where unusual behavior might be tolerated but a publicly licensed facility that would be closed down if just one patron complained.

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