by dreamingtime
boring! But I think you are a bit clownish yourself. too much time in the process of selling us the "cop lines" of the story, and not enough time on the love scenes. that IS what this website is for idn't it?
this story was so boreing,,, it was ignorant,,, Please stop writing... I think Danno needs to book you,,,
this story was boreing... it was totally ignorant... please stop writing