All Comments on 'The Cocktail Party'

Great effort...perfect dialog...loved it! Just one thing..."Jennifer was on the edge, grinding her face against him as she came." Shouldn't that be .."grinding his face against her...."?

Regardless, I just loved it.

...featuring a lusty femdom, just what Literotica needs more-of.

I would love to be him. My face buried in a hot wet pussy and my ass filled with a hard cock.

Can't suck just one. Loved the story. Makes my lips ache for a hard cock.

I loved it! Just one editorial suggestion. The transitions between the main story and the flashback (particularly the

first transition) are sometimes a bit ambiguous. Consider using a typographical device, such as a section separator or a different type face, to mark the transitions more clearly.

Hot tale nicely told

I have been playing for a couple of years like this. I watch my wife as she gets other men to suck a friend off. I watch on hidden camera. She flirts with them until they have to get relief. She's good at it . I watch it all and can't wait for the next perverted game!

Hot. Now if Jennifer and James shared a 3 bedroom house and were looking for a 3td. roommate?