All Comments on 'The Collapse Ch. 02'

So far, it's a good story. Not the first post-apocalypse slavery story I've seen, but it is siomewhat original. Please keep writing.

rather boring and redundant

The combination of chapters 1 and 2 make it an awesome story. I can't wait to see how it progresses. Very original. I love your positive attitude on procreation. I feel the same way.

very good story, would like to read more.

Very well written. I enjoy that you care to build a whole background for the characters and their world.

Your writing has the perfect mix of background, believable characterization and impregnation sex that makes me want to keep coming back to read your work. Out of my many years of looking at online sexual material, your work is some of the best.

I really, really hope that you continue to write because you have a gift!

I admit I was a bit reluctant to read this story as it didn't look very interesting to me at first but once I started I was instantly hooked! It's very hot, very interesting and of course it has it's sweet moments which are a great touch. Especially with how much Mr. Evans cares about Amy, it looks like he's even falling in love with her and I'd love to see that progress further. And of course for Amy to become pregnant with his baby which I bet would make him even happier. I really hope you plan to continue this story. It's just too great not to! :D

I liked the whole story line. It is a good mixture of plot and sex. Please keep writing.

Please continue ! !!

You are planning to continue this story right? It's amazing and I'd really hate to see it end here! D:

It's been months since I've read two full stories all the way through. Yours really caught, and held, my attention. You paint an interesting view of the world in between the sexapades. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please write more chapters of The Collapse. Have more breeding and then Amy bears Mr Evans a baby and then he decides when she gets pregnant again without asking her but she loves it. And he can buy another virgin to enjoy both girls and get her pregnant as well. You write the best erotica by far. Also on Asstr please write sequels to Drugged and Bred please!

It would be great for him to start Requiring Amy to service his business clients to close deals.

She could be required to give clients bj as they discuss deals or she may have to spend time in the chambers serving a client as her master for the evening as a deal closer