by ZotDragon
Your first chapter talks about how she wants to remain a virgin, so they don't have sex. However, in this second chapter, with no lead up or explanation, you say how Simon loves to have her be on top of him, so he can suck her breasts while he thrusts deep inside her. So they apparently are now having sex? I'm not sure if you forgot that they weren't having sex, or just forgot to include a short transition paragraph.<br><br>
Other than that, I really like this story. The breast milk fetish is not for everyone, but it has always been a turn on for me. I'm like the girl in the story, and can orgasm just by having my breasts suckled on deeply. It has never led to production of breast milk, but what a fun fantasy. I liked Simon going out and buying a nursing bra for her too!
Love the storyline with this one! Wish I was he one nursing at her breasts. Waiting to see where this one goes.