All Comments on 'The Collegiate Milkmaid'

Interesting story, well written. The only "bump" is the paragraph where the scene changes from the clinic back to her boyfriend. I thought that lacked some kind of separation.

I'd also like to know what the character's going to do about it and what her boyfriend will say...

Although the transition was odd I really liked this story. Please continue the story: she is waiting to lose her virginity and I am waitung for a fountain of breast milk when she orgasms .

cant wait