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Anonymousabout 10 years agoGreat series, great writing
This has been a great story so far, your writing style is wonderful and superbly detailed. Please keep this series going. Can't wait for Jet to fuck the twin sisters, and any other Parisians that cross their paths.
Anonymousover 9 years agoupgrade
Business class upgraded to first class then at end of this chapter business class ???? Apart from slight errors in chapters still a good series...
Anonymousabout 8 years agoGreat story
One minor point their seats were upgraded to first class and you at the end had them seated in business.
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