All Comments on 'The Commander Ch. 07'

by deltablonde

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
loved it

I loved the new instalment!

You took the story a very nice turn!

Please go on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sequels

Very nice would like to see the "disco sisters" remain active characters in this story series with Don/Jet making them better practitioners of sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I liked the bdsm part

It was mild but interesting because I hope to see some more of it in the future, and this time Jet doing it on the twins! (and vice-versa stands too) I hope you will be very imaginative with it.

Oh, and btw, loving what you're doing with the story. Jet's become much different than when he was just Don at the beginning, and in a great way!

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