All Comments on 'The Computer Class'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love It

Love spanking stories, especially teacher/student stories where the student really wants to be punished by being spanked. More stories about spanking, please!

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Amazing, HOT, well done story. A few oops here and there but easily overlooked. 5+

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Typos!

While the story was hot, I was distracted by the grammatical/spelling errors. The overuse of the word "vagina" also took away from the "hotness" factor.

Keep writing. But have someone proof it for you before submitting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
it was hot..but.

It was a pretty hot story, but there's a lot of grammatical errors. You overused the word 'girl' and 'vagina' took away from the sexiness of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
awesome but...

it was such a turn on but girl isnt a sexy nickname. And vagina makes me feel like im reading about an 80 year old fucking his dead wife. jeez

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