All Comments on 'The Confessional Ch. 01'

This can go on forever! You have to figure out the voice problem, though, especially when he's excited.

Good job with a lot of imagination. thanks for a good read!

Please write more for this, it’s a great setup, but it end right where it’s really getting good. Maybe a few more stories? He asks her for dirtier details then she’s openly sharing, she maybe reluctantly answers, assuming she must to be saved.

Oops! Just realized it’s multi chapter SORRY!