All Comments on 'The Consummate Game'

I had trouble reading and following the story. It seemed really vague and the ending wasn't clear. The story seemed to have a lot of potential, but I didn't understand it. Sorry.

Combining the erotic with the pace and mystery of a short story, I thought the story was engaging, well written and well conceived. I don't finish most of the stories I start, but this one kept me going.