All Comments on 'The Contract Ch. 02'

Excellent!

Wow. Funny, sexy, loving and well written. A great deal of fun to read. Thank you.

A good read. Thank you.

Loved how you took her under and the fractioning process to drop her ever deeper.

The story was wonderful by itself from the first to the last. This is the second time I've read it. It was just as delightful as the first.

Thanks Gemini, you said it for me. Loved every word of it.

Great story, well written and an excellent read. Thank you for your effort!

That's not a mind control story. It's a love story, a beautiful one.

Thank you!

Which only goes to show that you can please all of the people some of the time and some of the people all of the time but you can't please all of the people all of the time.

I have read nearly all the stories here and this is by far the most captivating of all. It is well written, well thought out, and very well presented. You impressed me most by not misusing then and than, your and you're. Job well done.

to think you couldn't write a story better than "The Addicted Natural." Well, I'm not sure this is better but it is, in a shorter form, its equal.

Thank you for giving me so much pleasure in reading; just so much satisfaction.

Your stories, those that I've read, are definitely in a literary niche: hypnosis and submissiveness. But they are so well done! Bravo!

Is a superior piece of writing. I have never really read a story that was such a great psychological tale while also still managing to be sexual, funny, and completely entertaining.

This is one of my top 5 best ever read stories and I will be reading multiple times while passing the name along to others.

Thank you for using your talent on something like this.

A beautifully written love story!