All Comments on 'The Conversation'

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ohioohioover 17 years ago
really nice story!

I liked the way you explored both the excitement at the thought of bringing others into bed with them, and the ambivalent, nervous, jealous feelings that arose when they imagined it.

Great story!

ohio

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
I second OHIO’s compliments!

It seemed like she was teasing both her partner and the reader simultaneously.

Very creative!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ending 1

The sexual descriptions were okay, but what I really found believable and amusing was the ending after the sex.

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