- NonHuman
- The Coven Ch. 06
- Page 2
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Click hereThere was sound of hurried feet and the door to greenhouse was knocked at. A musical voice announced the intention to enter and the person to whom the voice belonged to entered. As soon as she saw Trixie, Liz scrambled to cover herself. Sam helped her and Trixie stood with her back towards them.
When they were dressed, Liz called out to Trixie softly, almost embarrassed at being caught in greenhouse.
"You have mated Liz." Trixie said to Sam, "You have awoken her full powers."
- COMMENTS
pleasure_wavealmost 9 years agoAuthorI saw your feedback about grammar mistakes and have decided to get an editor. My next story however, is already submitted and will be out in some days. But from Ch. 08 all stories will be checked by an editor first.
Thanks for the lovely feedback and response.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYou're continuing! One thing: there is something odd about the writing..you don't use "the" "a" always where you should. For example "Jade can see future"... Instead of "the future". I'm curious, is your first language Polish or something similar? My best friend was Polish and she had the same issue with articles in English. Anyway, would be nice to correct, as it breaks the flow, but otherwise, great job, looking forward to more.
artisinbugalmost 9 years agoI'm excited to read more. This story captured my attention whole heartedly. I read a lot and this could easily be one of my favorites.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI just started reading this story yesterday and I love it, I just saw you write a comment and I'm happy to know you haven't abandoned this story, I'll be waiting for your next entry.
pleasure_wavealmost 9 years agoAuthorI lost my mojo for quite a while. I had a few personal issues but I dont believe in giving excuses. So just saying that - am sorry I dropped the ball, will submit a new chapter in few days.
