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All Comments on 'The Cowboy And The Lady Ch. 02'

by katxmeowx

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vlawvlawover 14 years ago
Yeah :)

Don't wait so long next time!!! :)

totallyateasetotallyateaseover 14 years ago
Well worth the wait

Way to go Kat!

I Loved it

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Not as good as the first chapter

Seemed rushed.

YornHYornHover 14 years ago
What's wrong?

I am not a writer. Something is missing in this 2-chapter story. - All the right words are there - kissing, lust, fucking, but it all seems superficial.

The ingredients are there, why don't they mix into an entertaining, even fascinating, relationship? - I don't know but the text just left me unsatisfied - something was missing - I don't know what - but, of course, I'm not a writer.

Kat, I thinks you have a lot to learn - or some deeper insight into psychology (feelings between men/women) - maybe some maturity? I don't know - something is missing, though.

I enjoyed the story, but it seemed superficial.

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