All Comments on 'The Crop'

more... pull us further into your tale... what does the master feel?... is it part of what makes kristin the way she is?... a description of the crop mighthave fitted in nicely somewhere. Not criticism just trying to help... mostly what's needed is.. more, more, more... now! (lol)

Kristin got off rather easy with only receiving the crop. Sir John really needed to use a Strap.