All Comments on 'The Dance'

Before the inevitable rush of comments asking why it didn't degenerate into an orgy, may I say I appreciated the restraint. Gave the story more of a buzz, and left the plotline ever so slightly less unlikely. (It might have been nice to have him observe Jenny's gradual striptease and let us know how he felt about dragging her into his fetish: perhaps an accompanying version from her p.o.v.?)

Promised a lot delivered nothing, very weak, would like to have seen Jenny double fucked

Who says seniors can't still have fun? A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.