All Comments on 'The Darkness Beyond Ch. 02'

by fieryjen

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stindustinduover 16 years ago
please continue

i'm really enjoying this story. i hope i see updates fairly often! :D

rgraham666rgraham666over 16 years ago
Cool!

Coming along very nicely.

I really don't like Cian and the rest of the vampires. Far too selfish and cruel.

So I'll keep reading this hoping they'll get their just desserts. ;)

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Different and fascinating

I'm hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
E(xcellent)

Very engrossing and addictive characters and plot line. I'm hooked.

Dancewithme2Dancewithme2over 15 years ago
Sensational

Jen, This was just sensational!! Powerfully captivating.

This chapter was remarkably good with a great productive imagination at work in the writing! The ending obviously draws the reader in like very few do. Nothing like sci-fi mystery!

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