All Comments on 'The Date'

by krazzykat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wrong cat this is just a cheating wife/slut story

Sorry not erotic, just cheating slut. Try LW.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
First Time

Perfect for a short story. Liked it!

Write more, you have a nice story and stay close to area of real life possibilities.

Looking for more, Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
No where ...

does the story state that Amy is married.

ImagetakerImagetakerover 13 years ago
Good Start

Nice first story. It will get easier and better the more you do it!

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