All Comments on 'The Day Time Stood Still'

Hope You do more. Does the kid have a good looking mom or sis?

How about revenge on some girl that dissed him. Lots of good stuff cums to mind

I think we all have fantasies of this sort...the control thing. I liked your story and see possibilities of more adventures. waiting for the next chapter in your adventure.

Great beginning. You already have the control part sorted out. There are so many ways you could go with this. Family,Friends,group, etc.

It would be interesting if you can "turn time on and off" and witness what happens afterwards. Think of the "positions" you could put people in and write about their reactions.

perhaps you could drop in on an office where some girls are doing work experience, you know - secretaries and schoolgirls; together!