All Comments on 'The Deal'

... I feel I must return the compliment and thank you for writing for us, subsonja. If this is really one of your first attempts at writing, we are lucky to have you aboard!

Very well done - four stars for a really good read. Please write much more for us - and watch the fives roll in!

From start to finish this was a good story, I can't wait to see what you write next I will be looking out for your next one.

You are very talented!!! Can't wait to see what's next!!

Personally not a big fan of being shared as a business perk, but that's me.

At least the One showed care and appreciation.

Very hot and nicely written. Look forward to more from you.

but I find the uppercase/lowercase thing distracting. Just sayin' ...but congrats on your debut at Literotica! Looking forward to your coming attractions...take care...

Thanks so much for all Y/your feedback! i am enjoying writing so much. i have many more ideas that i am playing around with that i hope Y/you A/all will enjoy reading!

I really enjoyed your story. I was sitting on the edge of my seat - it was a real page turner a very quick read. Cannot wait to see what you write next. Keep up the great work - your writing will only get better and better.

Thank You for this one. :) Very much looking forward . . .

he doesn't care for her at all. Good way to show just that.