All Comments on 'The Debut Ch. 02'

This chapter is just as hot as the first one. I think there could be another chapter or two

about this couple.

I didn't read chapter one nor will I- This is a great story as it stands and to try to "milk it" would be to diminish it.

What ever the plot for the next chapter is, make it a stand alone story also.

You touch all the hot buttons of my fantacies. I can hardly wait for your next story.

And it is about time that people realized this. Bravo T@nman! Keep up the good work!

And could Literotica get a category going for bisexual tales, like Nifty does?

I know some people call this strange, but straight men suck cock. In cllege I once saw a football player on our team sucked at least 4 0r 5 cocks and got fucked in the ass once. He wounded up becoming a very successful man in real estate, with 3 sons and 2 daughters and 7 grand kids. He is still married to the same wife he married while in college. I do not know if this was a one time thing for him or if he continued to do it, but very few or our people ever mentioned his actions in puplic and it died on the vine,

story line grew logically and erotically. loved it!

This is absolutley the best of all worlds, it helps me to better understand why I am married and once in a while have a fantasy about making out with another guy.

More like this PLEASE

Great stproies. Keep them coming. Literotica: let's have more bisexual stories as a category. This was far more bisexual than gay male.

Loved this story, i finally got through it after the third time trying ;) i love the descriptions of the experimental fun they had and working up to letting loose sexually. I would love to have another couple to play with and mostly to play with the guy. Great story, thanks

Such a hot story