by kellym01
The story so far is good but is puzzling without some backstory...for instance, why is Sarah in Hell? She was the one that was murdered and all I saw of her character was a tendency to swear about the boss and some anger issues :) I really hope that isn't enough to head for Hell or I am in trouble!
I would definitely read further chapters
Good first attempt I thought, although a little short. Looking forward to the next chapter!