All Comments on 'The Discovery: Prison Inmates Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
love it

i love this so much. Please don't let jamie get hurt, no disrespect but please submit the next chapter sooon. I love your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG

This story is soooooo good.This story could be a book.I would buy it

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
Yay!

So glad to see this out! Love this story... love the confusion of Jamie, love the protectivness of Rhys, love the danger of the setting! Can't wait for ch3!

SecretDeviantSecretDeviantover 13 years ago
So good!!

This series is sooo goood!! I love the emotions and the flirtation and the passion! I cant wait for more!!

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 13 years ago
Enjoying this story

It reminds me of the love story on "Oz," only, you know, they aren't psychopaths. :o) I'd just like to recommend you pay more attention to details -- sometimes you choose the wrong word, or the verb tense will shift mid-sentence or paragraph. Also, you really think a thug like Ace would let Rhys get away with shaming him like that, or without one of his buddies breaking in to help? I think not.

avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago

fascinating tale(hehehe)... well worth the wait, can't wait for ch 3 and to find out what Ace has in store for Jamie and Rhys

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story line

How many chapters do I have to get through - for the happy ending? This is a wonderful story. I believe Ace will try to cause a lot of trouble, but it would be interesting to see Jamie get cleared of his charges, released and then waiting for Rhys when he gets out - to see if they end up in a wonderful relationship together. This has the makings of a great love story with a few twists and turns along the way. Rhys and Jamie seem to make a terrific couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pretty Impressed

Usually stories of this genre are such a turn off to me...buuut this is amazing. I love it actually. Please write quickly your avid fans are panting for the next chapter. I love the love story in this. I know it needs a bit of action to fuel the fire but I hope noone gets hurt too bad!

Contest4JenContest4Jenover 13 years ago

I was so happy when i saw you had a new chapter out. Jamie is so cute but i hope he doesn't make poor Rhys wait for too long! I'm terribly excited to see where you will take this story, and i can't wait to see what Ace has in store for them! Cheers :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Continue!

Please PLEASE continue more with this. I love the relationship that has developed between Rhys and Jamie. Silly Jamie needs to come to his senses, before some new inmate gets to the prison and tries to steal Rhys away from him. That would be awesome. Haha. Anyways, post more! Can't wait to read!

ashbabyashbabyabout 13 years ago
Ahhh!!!

It's such a great plot line, with excellent characters and plenty of space for future chapters. I was a little wary of the story at first, mostly because I am not a great fan of prison rape stories, but I am more than glad that I decided to give this one a shot. Please continue the story!!! I know that I am anxiously awaiting the coming chapters and more amazing relationship development from Rhys and Jamie, and I also know that I am not the only one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

When does Part 3 come out?!

I just can't fucking wait!

Lovely_Emma_21Lovely_Emma_21about 13 years ago
More more please!!

I can't wait for more! Please HURRY!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
can't wait

Really, really need more! Please!

uchenauchenaabout 13 years ago

Wow this is so much better than i was expecting! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Happy Writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Love It

I didn't think the story would be soooo good. I love how the plot keeps building and that you are telling the story from both perspectives. Can't wait till the next chapter.

midnighter432midnighter432about 13 years ago
OMG

please please please post the next chapter soon i am so into this story i check everyday for the new chapter i love how you write from both sides and how the plot just keeps building i sit on the edge of my seat when i read not knowing what wil happen next

LOVE IT :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
wow!

the sex & intesity is awesome. U don't find it everywhere even if da story is good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Writing

I love this story (as well as chapter length) and this is my third re-read. I see you have posted another story. I hope this does not mean you have abandoned Rhys and Jamie. Awaiting the next chapter with baited breath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

love write more! XOXOXOXOX!

Roseflower216Roseflower216almost 13 years ago
Unexpected

i have to admit i was a little hesitant to read this series at first but now i`m really glad i did keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Haha

How did Rhys suddenly turn into a ninja with Clint Eastwood references? Sneakin up on Ace even tho he's right in front of him.. ;)

7letcher7letcherover 9 years ago
I wish

Posh, i truly wish you would finish this story. It really is so fantastic. I love these two.

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