All Comments on 'The Dream'

by ozgood948

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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Very nicely written. So many possibilities. You have had encounters like this with women. Your wife wants to do this with a stranger. Or, just a nice fantasy. I do hope you will write more. Really enjoyed how this was from the woman's perspective. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A must

Please there must be more chapters to this great start. There are so many possibilities this story could take and surely the main character will in future be exposing herself to many more men and adventures.

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