All Comments on 'The Dream'

Yet another grade school grammer dropout. There is so frequent and improper use of "..." and other author brain clearing junk as to totally waste space and bandwidth. Remove 99.99% and then repost the story.

Good interactions among the character. Thanks for writing!

Thanks for posting the story, it was creative and erotic, with a nice surprise ending. I wouldn't pay too much attention to the brave, anonymous self-proclaimed expert that had so much difficulty spelling the word grammar.