All Comments on 'The Dream'

Very erotic, with a good sense of pacing. I look forward to reading more from you.

Usually I prefer dialogue to show how the characters are responding to each other, but this is beautifully done. Thank you.

I look forward to more of your writings.

How hot is this sentence: "The union is a powerful connection of two aroused and eager participants in an ageless choreographed dance of desire." That's an elegant way of saying what I call a blasting screaming good fuck.

Somehow you manage to craft erudite turns of phrase and still make it hot and sexy. This kind of dream I would not want to wake up from!