All Comments on 'The Dressing Room Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Not a bad story, but I think cum shold go inside: mouth, pussy, or ass. It's wasted outside the women's body. Just my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Above C level :-)

"Blouse unbuttoned to the naval"? Must have been sea-thru!

Sorry, couldn't resist that, but other than that, a very nice effort. Please continue. We "critics" have nothing better to do, so you should ignore us. Remember, those who can, write, those who can't, criticize.

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