by FiveWolves
This may be the third best Christmas. story ever (Miracle on 34th Street and Gift of the Mafi). Thanks for sharing it and especially for categorizing it as sci-fi. I would probably not read it otherwise - tony great loss. Thanks again.
what a sweet story, well written. this goes onto my favourites.
One of my newest favorites. The author really kept the interest peaked, sex was great !!
So HOT! I would move to the North Pole for Tina :)... And Maggie was definitely worth making a trip to Macy's for! I love both girls... This was s super sweet holiday read. 5 STARS!
a story by an Elf before; this was an excellent intro. Well written - I enjoyed it immensely.
Thank you for posting it.
It was an awesome well written story, I absolutely loved it. It would be nice to see a follow up story with Tina, Maggie and their family.
Loved it from beginning to the end! A wonderful adventure! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story!
How refreshing! Never read anything like it before. Simply awesome!
Well done FiveWolves, I LOVED IT!!!
A beautiful story, by a truly beautiful mind. Please keep writing, and making the world a much nicer place.
I have enjoyed all your writing and love the way that you build believable characters, even in an unbelievable situation! You mention that there is a slow build-up, it is always worth it and I think your stories could be taken further. Have you thought of writing a novel/novella around one of your thems? I realise it woudl be a agreat deal of work, but I am sure it would be a great read.
What a great short story! Thank you for sharing it with us!
This has been on to read list for a while. I thought it was great! I am adding it to my Christmas list of stories.
Thank you