All Comments on 'The EMT Ch. 01'

You made an original and good start to your story. I can't wait for the next instalments.

I enjoyed your approach to create sexual inuendo and earthly feeling of all parties introduced. Hope you can keep up the underlying suggestions of a real hot story

Thanks to all those who have read this opening part of my story, and special thanks to those that have voted and commented, either publicly here, or privately to me.

My intention was always to write a believable story, and that means taking the time to develop the characters and the storyline. Based on the feedback I have received, at least some of you are enjoying the approach. For those of you looking for more "instant" gratification, I apologise that this story may not be for you; good luck in finding whatever it is that you do seek.

Rotter

...story after reading your comment on "Don't Ask, Don't tall". really well-written and an intriguing build -up.

Wonderful set-up. Excellently paced and well thought out. I especially ejoyed the conflict your leading lady had to her e-mail and the manner in which she resolved it. Including her decision not to tell her parents, and the resons why she came to that decision. The entire begining is completely believable and finely written. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Probably one of the best

I truly like this. One of the few stories I have given 5 stars too. I like the build up and hope the next chapter lives up to this one's expectations.

Nice first chapter. It leaves a guy with a lot of questions. Is the friend involved? How much does the wife really know? How far will she go for her husbands promotion? ETC. It left me wanting to read more about this couple.

She is eager to participate and she know who one of the other people is. Or does she? It's just gossip and who really knows.

Keep on writing!

I have just discovered this wonderful story,although posted 12 years ago. I don't know if you still visit the site but if you do then I would like you to know it has excited and intrigued me. You have set the scene perfectly, as well as I have ever read in erotic stories. Exceptionally well written, intriguing and very believable. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Obviously a 5 as there is no 10. Thank you for sharing your exciting imagination. Jamie

Looking forward to following this story, I for one always enjoy the more believable ones!

Great beginning of a very erotic storyline!

I am really impressed with your ability to tell a story without rushing to the highlights.

Suzanne and Ian are very likeable characters and I can not wait to read more about them

and obviously the other male persons.

So, I look forward to a lot of part after discovering your stories and talent quite late.

It is my fortune that I only just have finished part one....

Thank you for sharing your impressive storytelling!

A new fan!

Excellent! Second reading and love the slow build up and character development. While I do enjoy the short to the point story, this is much more satisfying. The honesty between husband and wife is absolutely essential in a long lasting, loving, cuck/slut marriage. Hope you find the time and energy to continue writing.